So here I am on Blog spot…….this place was introduced to me by Chandni.
I am new to the blog world and hope to make the best use of this space.
Thinking of you I thought…….
What makes me think of you day and night
What makes me smile at just your sight
What makes me tell you about my every bite
What makes me love you for all my life
Thinking of you I thought…….
What made you think that I am not worthwhile
What made you frown at even the voice of mine
What made you hide your heart’s deepest vibes
What made you hate me for what I made of mine
Thinking of you I thought…….
We dreamt of being together
We dreamt of sharing light
We dreamt of walking hand in hand, and
We dreamt of fighting for other’s right
Thinking of you I though…….
There was a day when I was angry
There was a day when you were not happy
There was a day when we both fought
There was a day when we both cried
But, how can we ever be like this
But, how can we ever live like this
I know you are right and I am not wrong
But, how can heart know when to mind and when to not
Thinking of you I thought……
Alas, I am still thinking of you after the thought……
19 comments:
Hey.. Thats indeed a serious thought.. Very well written with elements of irony in it.. These thoughts do cross your mind at some point in your life and you have managed to put it in words beautifully..
Keep up the good work..!!
Cheers,
Nikhil
Nikhil- You are the first to comment on my first blog and that too with an appreciation...Thanks a lot
Hey.. You're welcome.. But I really feel that when you come across something good, it should be appreciated..
In this case, I really found it to be written very gracefully and could relate to it somewhat if not completely... One of my fav quotes goes like:
My thoughts are free to go anywhere, but it's surprising how often they head in your direction. :P
Keep it coming..!!
Cheers,
Nikhil
kya baat hai ji... welcome to blogger and thanks for mentioning my name.. :)
mam.. don't think much.. the magic word is ACT nd mke thngs happenn... hee..hee... gud one mam.. lagey raho India..
Chandni-Thanks sweety
Ankit-- This is not an act of thinking but feeling....waise thank you for commenting before reading...
Nikhil-- Nice quotation and hope to see you often
Hey..!! Will be back as often as you update the blog.. :) By the way, do you like writing about some specific topics generally or just random thoughts....?
Cheers,
Nikhil
mam..oh.. my mistake.. shld hve read btwn d lines.. ab parhne ki kya zaroorat hai.. aap aise hi bata dena jab koi feel hogi aapko kisi ke liye.. om shanti om ka dialogue yad hai naa.. ab parh liya hai mam.. acchha likha hai mam aapne..last 2 lines r d most worth.. gud wrk mam.. looking frwrd 2 see mre of dese..
Nikhil- Its just Random thoughts. But yes i would love to write about some good topics...any suggestions?
Ankit-Jarur, koi hoga to apko jarur batayege...The last two lines are mine favourite too and i would definately try to post good writings.....
Wel, its your blog and it wouldn't be the same if I tell you what to write about.. I mean it's all about what you feel writing about... Anyways, as you asked, I feel since you have a good command over the language.. an exquisite ability to describe things, maybe you can write a bit about Nature... Human behaviour n relationships to bring out the best in you.. but this is just a suggestion.. :)
So, have you been writing earlier also.. I mean apart from this blog...?
Cheers,
Nikhil
I have writing before only in my diaries or my old note books... Relations and Emotions is what i think i can right best of...
What abt you? I saw your blog, you have very good posts there..
sorry its write and not right
Hey Anjali..good to see u on blogspot..btw..someone has turned into a poetess...anyways..this is really a good read yar...keep writing :)Riyanka
Riya- Hi... good to see you here to. Thanks for appreciation...will definately continue writing..
and yes do keep visiting
romantic side of u... waaaooo
Purbi--Thank you sweety
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